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writing a letter to friend about looking a job in abroad

writing a letter to friend about looking a job in abroad ArEXl

Dear Alice how are you? . how is your family and my bed partner Loki the smart German Shepherd. It's been few months we met in Italy and still i am full of that memories. I am writing to you in regards with my plan to take up job in abroad. As you know, working for elderly people give soul soothing peace and needed income. I am looking for caretaker job that perhaps could reduce my anxiety of loneliness, moreover, this could help me to over from the tragedy of my parents death and aid me to deviate myself from sorrows and sadness that dragging me back to depression. I would really appreciate if you could share some information such as salary, though it's not vital for me as of now but, it should be enough for survival and meet my daily needs. in addition to that, do specify daily hours of working and timing of it. On the happy part, being close to you would be a life changing moments for me, eagerly waiting for your detailed reply and looking forward to meet you soon. Best wishes Arul

Dear Alice

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how
 are you? Don't put a space before the full stop.
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This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHow
how
 is your family and my bed partner Loki the smart German Shepherd. It's been few months we met in Italy and still
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 am full of that memories.

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people
 give soul soothing peace and needed income. I am looking for caretaker job that perhaps could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 my anxiety of loneliness, moreover
, this could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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some
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but
, it should be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 for survival and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
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 addition to that, do specify daily hours of working and timing of it.

On the happy part, being close to you would be a life changing moments for me, eagerly
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meet
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soon
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Best wishes

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Arul