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explain the circumstances say why you are dissatisfied what action you would like the leisure center to take

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Dear Sir/Madam, Iam writing this letter to exhibit my dissastisfed with the maintenance and issues involved. To begin with, my family and friends extensively use the community centre for various activities. My husband and mother-in-law take Yoga lessions everyday at community hall. My friends and I use the sports facilities like badminton and swimming frequently. But unfortunately, the Badminton rackets are damaged and Pool is filled with Dust particels and dried leafs which is very unpleasent. Childrens visit the place regularly for sports and games but the ground is completly filled with grass, I would request you to please provide a maid appointed for maintaining it by converting it in to loan. Infact it is one of the very few places that is safe for the children to play freely. Kindly look in to it and santize it with caution. There is a leakage of tap issue in the rest room please fix it as soon as possible. There are 5 threadmills in the gym session out of which 2 are under repair, please get them replaced. In addition, we would require Gym cycle about 4 a weight machine and a coach appointed to guide us. I sincerely request you to consider them. I look forward to hear a positive outcome from the council. Yours faithfully, Bhavani.
Dear Sir/Madam,

Iam
writing this letter to exhibit my
dissastisfed
with the maintenance and issues involved.

To
begin
with, my family and friends
extensively
use
the community
centre
for various activities.

My husband and mother-in-law take Yoga
lessions
everyday
at community hall. My friends and I
use
the

sports facilities like badminton and swimming
frequently
.

But
unfortunately, the Badminton rackets
are damaged
and Pool
is filled
with Dust
particels
and dried leafs

which
is
very
unpleasent
.
Childrens
visit the place
regularly
for sports and games
but
the ground is
completly
filled


with
grass, I would request you to
please
provide a maid appointed for maintaining it by converting it in to loan.

Infact
it is one of the
very
few places
that is
safe for the children to play
freely
. Kindly look in to it and
santize
it

with caution.

There is a leakage of tap issue in the rest room
please
fix
it as
soon
as possible. There are 5
threadmills
in the gym session

out of which 2 are under repair,
please
get
them replaced.
In addition
, we would require Gym cycle about 4 a weight machine and
a


coach
appointed to guide us.

I
sincerely
request you to consider them. I look forward
to hear
a
positive
outcome from the council.

Yours
faithfully
,

Bhavani
.
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IELTS letter explain the circumstances say why you are dissatisfied what action you would like the leisure center to take

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  American English
13 paragraphs
217 words
5.5
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