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Write a complaint letter to the manager of the restaurant. Say about bad service and awful meals

Write a complaint letter to the manager of the restaurant. Say about bad service and awful meals xx1gQ

Dear Sir I am writing you to complain about the service and food of your restaurant. Last night I tended to organise my birthday party in your restraurant, as one of my relatives advised me your place. She praised your restraurant so highly, I was keen on to arrange my party in that place. However, the result made me upset. We were about to launch our party at 6, but when my friend and relatives came to the restaurant, the table was not ready to sit at. I suddenly called the head waiter and made a complaint about the slow service. All waiters collaborated to serve our table quickly. Besides, when we started eating, the meals were not enough delicious, salads were stale and dishes were too salty. I was really disappointed. I did not satisfied with your service and meal, as well. I suppose, you should alter your service or even servants. I hope, you will improve your serving and eliminate inconvenience. Yours sincerely! Rose Smith

Dear Sir

I am writing you to complain about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
 and food of your restaurant.

Last night I tended to Possible spelling mistake. 'organise' is British English.organize
organise
 my birthday party in your Possible spelling mistake found.restaurant
restraurant
, as one of my relatives advised me your place. She praised your Possible spelling mistake found.restaurant
restraurant
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
highly
, I was keen on to arrange my party in that place. However
, the result made me upset. We were about to launch our party at 6, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 when my friend and relatives came to the restaurant, the table was not ready to sit at. I suddenly
 called the head waiter and made a complaint about the slow You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
. All waiters collaborated to serve our table quickly
. Besides
, when we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 eating, the meals were not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 delicious, salads were stale and dishes were too salty. I was really
 disappointed. I did not After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "satisfy"?satisfy
satisfied
 with your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
 and meal, as well
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 suppose, you should alter your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
 or even servants. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope, you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 your serving and eliminate inconvenience.

Yours sincerely
!

Rose Smith