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Write a complaint letter to the manager of the restaurant. Say about bad service and awful meals

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Dear Sir I am writing you to complain about the service and food of your restaurant. Last night I tended to organise my birthday party in your restraurant, as one of my relatives advised me your place. She praised your restraurant so highly, I was keen on to arrange my party in that place. However, the result made me upset. We were about to launch our party at 6, but when my friend and relatives came to the restaurant, the table was not ready to sit at. I suddenly called the head waiter and made a complaint about the slow service. All waiters collaborated to serve our table quickly. Besides, when we started eating, the meals were not enough delicious, salads were stale and dishes were too salty. I was really disappointed. I did not satisfied with your service and meal, as well. I suppose, you should alter your service or even servants. I hope, you will improve your serving and eliminate inconvenience. Yours sincerely! Rose Smith
Dear Sir

I am writing you to complain about the
service
and food of your restaurant.

Last night I tended to
organise
my birthday party in your
restraurant
, as one of my relatives advised me your place. She praised your
restraurant
so
highly
, I was keen on to arrange my party in that place.
However
, the result made me upset. We were about to launch our party at 6,
but
when my friend and relatives came to the restaurant, the table was not ready to sit at. I
suddenly
called the head waiter and made a complaint about the slow
service
. All waiters collaborated to serve our table
quickly
.
Besides
, when we
started
eating, the meals were not
enough
delicious, salads were stale and dishes were too salty. I was
really
disappointed. I did not
satisfied
with your
service
and meal,
as well
.

I
suppose, you should alter your
service
or even servants.
I
hope, you will
improve
your serving and eliminate inconvenience.

Yours
sincerely
!

Rose Smith
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IELTS letter Write a complaint letter to the manager of the restaurant. Say about bad service and awful meals

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  American English
5 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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