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writing a letter for incorrect information on a article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter regarding incorrect information about my home town. I read your article last week about cancellation of "Paru-paru" festival. Just for your information the even is not cancelled due to current situation there will be some precautionary. The event will be on the same date as mention in your article 26 July 2021 at 03: 00 pm. During the event there will be some rules to be observe. First social distancing and avoid close contact with others. Second it is a mandatory to always wear mask. Lastly it is mandatory to check the temperature of all participants in the event. Most of the contender are well inform with the event but because of the imprecise information in your article we will might have misinterpretation. As a clarification, I would like to request to please correct the blunder in your article to avoid misconception to all the participants. I hope to hearing from you soon Yours Faithfully, Donna lou Salandanan

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter regarding incorrect information about my home town. I read your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpiece
article
 last week about cancellation of Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
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Paru-paru
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 festival.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
 for your information the even is not cancelled due to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 situation there will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 precautionary. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
 will be on the same date as mention in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpiece
article
 26 July 2021 at 03: 00 pm. During the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
 there will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 to be Consider using a past participle here: "observed".observed
observe
. First
 social distancing and avoid close contact with others. Second it is a mandatory to always wear mask. Lastly
 it is mandatory to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 the temperature of all participants in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
. Most of the contender are well Consider using a past participle here: "informed".informed
inform
 with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the imprecise information in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpiece
article
 we Two modal verbs connected. Did you mean: "will, might", "will" or "might"?will, mightwillmight
will might
 have misinterpretation.

As a clarification, I would like to request to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 correct the blunder in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpiece
article
 to avoid misconception to all the participants.

I hope to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon


Yours Faithfully
, Donna Possible spelling mistake found.LouyoulowLoslotlog
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Salandanan