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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter regarding incorrect information about my home town. I read your article last week about cancellation of "Paru-paru" festival. Just for your information the even is not cancelled due to current situation there will be some precautionary. The event will be on the same date as mention in your article 26 July 2021 at 03: 00 pm. During the event there will be some rules to be observe. First social distancing and avoid close contact with others. Second it is a mandatory to always wear mask. Lastly it is mandatory to check the temperature of all participants in the event. Most of the contender are well inform with the event but because of the imprecise information in your article we will might have misinterpretation. As a clarification, I would like to request to please correct the blunder in your article to avoid misconception to all the participants. I hope to hearing from you soon Yours Faithfully, Donna lou Salandanan
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter regarding incorrect information about my home town. I read your
article
last week about cancellation of
"
Paru-paru
"
festival.

Just
for your information the even is not cancelled due to
current
situation there will be
some
precautionary. The
event
will be on the same date as mention in your
article
26 July 2021 at 03: 00 pm. During the
event
there will be
some
rules
to be
observe
.
First
social distancing and avoid close contact with others. Second it is a mandatory to always wear mask.
Lastly
it is mandatory to
check
the temperature of all participants in the
event
. Most of the contender are well
inform
with the
event
but
because
of the imprecise information in your
article
we
will might
have misinterpretation.

As a clarification, I would like to request to
please
correct the blunder in your
article
to avoid misconception to all the participants.

I hope to hearing from you
soon


Yours
Faithfully
, Donna
lou
Salandanan
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IELTS letter writing a letter for incorrect information on a article

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
166 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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