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writing a application letter applying for position of patient journey partner

writing a application letter applying for position of patient journey partner 2Rb36

Dear Miss Nguyen Thi Tuong Van. I am writing this letter to apply for the position of Patient Journey Partner (PJP) which has been post on Roche. com on October 19th, 2021. I believe that I am suitable candidate for the position because I graduate from Hue University of Medicine and Pharmacy, majoring in Pharmacy. And I have more than 3 years of experience to work as a sales at Pharmacy companies. I am responsible for introduce and sell products according to the company's regulations; ensure sales are committed and completed on time. Besides, my daily job is selling and advice on drug use, so I have regular contact with many patients/clients, so I am experienced in understanding their psychology and needs. I know that connecting, problem-solving and being very passionate about patients are very important. I have good computer skills. Especially, I am proficient in MS Word, Excel and Powerpoint. Moreover, I am studying for the upcoming b1 certification exam and will definitely strengthen my English skills better. I also consider myself to be honest, punctual, reliable, hard-working and progressive. My desire is to improve the patient journey and I have a strong passion for bringing good value and impact to the healthcare ecosystem in Vietnam. I dare to take risks and experiment, I think that will make me stronger in my work. Please see more of my Curriculum Vitae. I would be grateful if you would consider my application. I am available for an interview any time. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Linh.

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 more of my Curriculum Vitae. I would be grateful if you would consider my application. I am available for an interview any time.

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I
 look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely
,

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