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letter writing to restaurant manager

letter writing to restaurant manager Jwlk5
Dear sir/Madam I am writing to express my gratitude for the service you offered on 30th December when I came along with my friends to celebrate my birthday. your staff made it more memorable by offering a complimentary cake. you made me one of your permanent customer, I will recommend this restaurant to my acquisition. The atmosphere was so relaxing and soothing, beautiful anterior and wonderful and accurately placed the lights not too bright nor too dim. The food was out of the world. let me say that it made me nostalgic, the taste was similar to my mother used to cook for me back home. it made me miss my mother and home. I would like to make some suggestions to you, If you will be able to give discount cards or offer some corporate discount to the people near by area. This, I believe would make dine-out more pocket-friendly. one again I would like to commend your professional attitude. Yours Faithfully, John
Dear sir/Madam

I am writing to express my gratitude for the service you offered on 30th December when I came along with my friends to celebrate my birthday.
your
staff made it more memorable by offering a complimentary cake.

you
made me one of your permanent customer, I will recommend this restaurant to my acquisition. The atmosphere was
so
relaxing and soothing,
beautiful
anterior and wonderful and
accurately
placed the lights not too bright nor too dim. The food was out of the world.
let
me say that it made me nostalgic, the taste was similar to my mother
used
to cook for me back home.
it
made me miss my mother and home. I would like to
make
some
suggestions to you, If you will be able to give discount cards or offer
some
corporate discount to the
people
near by
area.

This, I believe would
make
dine-out more pocket-friendly.
one
again I
would like to commend your professional attitude.

Yours
Faithfully
,

John
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IELTS letter letter writing to restaurant manager

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
163 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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