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Hi. I am Murshida, a fellow learner in the "Write Professional Emails In English" course. My native language is Bengali (which is spoken in West Bengal). I am pretty decent when it comes to English but can't say the same for Bengali. I like reading and writing, a lot. I spend my time doodling stuff, making designs, or bingeing on Criminology shows. I hate cooking but can cook a fairly good meal under dire circumstances.
Hi. I am
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Murshida
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Write Professional Emails In English
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course. My native language is Bengali (which
is spoken
in West Bengal). I am pretty decent when it
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comes
to English
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but
can't say the same for Bengali. I like reading and writing, a lot.
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I
spend my time doodling stuff, making designs, or
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bingeing
on Criminology
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shows
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I
hate cooking
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but
can cook a
fairly
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good
meal under dire circumstances.
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IELTS letter Email an Introduction of Yourself to Your Course Peers

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
75 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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