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Job application letter to the position of manager

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Dear Sir / Madam I am writing to you to express my interest in your job advertisement for a manager that I saw posted on Facebook on your oficial profile. I have extensive experience in this area, and now I am looking for part-time job. I graduated from the University in 2012 with a degree in financial management and now I am taking advanced training in restaurant business at a local college. At present, I am employed as a manager in a branch of the restaurant Friday's. I have always been very interested in the restaurant business and I am always looking for opportunities for my development in this area. That is why at the moment it is important for me to be able to combine study and work and apply new knowledge in practice. During my work in Friday's, our branch for 3 years showed the highest rates of profitability and occupancy by visitors even not in the peak days and hours. What I consider to be my merit, including as a successful leader of all processes of the restaurant. I will be glad to join your team and contribute to the development of your business. I am available for work Monday to Wednesday from 7 am to 2 pm and Thursday to Saturday from 3 pm to 10 pm. I look forward to meeting you to discuss the possibility of employment. Yours faithfully Alexandra Butlitsky

Dear Sir / Madam

I am writing to you to express my interest in your job advertisement for a manager that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 posted on Facebook on your Possible spelling mistake found.official
oficial
 profile.

I have extensive experience in this area, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I am looking for part-time job.

I graduated from the University in 2012 with a degree in financial management and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I am taking advanced training in restaurant business at a local college. At present, I am employed
 as a manager in a branch of the restaurant Friday's.

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very
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business and
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 why at the moment it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for me to be able to combine study and work and apply new knowledge in practice.

During my work in Friday's, our branch for 3 years This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 the highest rates of profitability and occupancy by visitors even not in the peak days and hours. What I consider to be my merit, including as a successful leader of all processes of the restaurant.

I will be glad to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 your team and contribute to the development of your business. I am available for work Monday to Wednesday from 7 am to 2 pm and Thursday to Saturday from 3 pm to 10 pm.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to meeting you to discuss the possibility of employment.

Yours faithfully


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Butlitsky