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Write your email in about 100 words. Include these points. Thank Jenny for her email. Say how you feel about staying in England. Tell her about the sort of music and films you like. Write about some of the things you like to do in your free time. Ask about Jenny's interests. Say goodbye.

Write your email in about 100 words. Include these points. Thank Jenny for her email. Say how you feel about staying in England. Tell her about the sort of music and films you like. Write about some of the things you like to do in your free time. Ask about Jenny's interests. Say goodbye. Klnn9
Hi Jenny, Thanks for your receiving email. I hope you are well. I am happy to stay with you and I want to see your parents and I want to visit a new country. As you know, I am not a talkative person and I like living in a silent place. I want to take many experiences from a new country. I want to know about other foreign people's lifestyles. I am keen on listening to soft music and I don't like films very much but sometimes I watch movies like ‘hobbit’. How about you? What kinds of music and films do u like? In my free time, I am serious about doing physical exercise and it helps to improve my mental health. I am keen on playing football and I also love playing cane-ball by myself. Most of my spend learning the English Language and watching video games and listening to music. What do you enjoy doing in your free time? What about you? I must be doing now to meet you and your family at next month. Looking forward to hearing you and I hope your family to be in good health. Ok, time to finish. Write soon! Bye 4 now, Aung
Hi Jenny,

Thanks for your receiving email. I hope you are well. I am happy to stay with you and I
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your parents and I
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to visit a new country.

As you know, I am not a talkative person and I like living in a silent place. I
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want
to take
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many
experiences from a new country. I
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want
to know about other foreign
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people
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movies like ‘hobbit’. How about you? What kinds of music and films do u like?

In my free time, I am serious about doing physical exercise and it
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helps
to
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improve
my mental health. I am keen on playing football and I
also
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love
playing cane-ball by myself. Most of my spend learning the English Language and watching video games and listening to music. What do you enjoy doing in your free time? What about you?

I
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be doing
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you and your family at
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month. Looking forward to hearing you and I hope your family to be in
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good
health.

Ok, time to finish. Write
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soon
!

Bye 4
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now
,

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Aung
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IELTS letter Write your email in about 100 words. Include these points. Thank Jenny for her email. Say how you feel about staying in England. Tell her about the sort of music and films you like. Write about some of the things you like to do in your free time. Ask about Jenny's interests. Say goodbye.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
203 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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