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Dear Daisy, How are you doing? I'm writing to inform you about my recent vacation in Quang Ngai, my hometown. I spent a couple of weeks there with my family. We stay in a peaceful and attractive village surrounded by spectacular mountain scenery. We went exploring and saw the Mai Son pagodas, the Tra Khuc river, and other attractions. We also took a speedboat cruise to Ly Son Island, where we swam in the stunning blue water and ate local delicacies including jellyfish salad, seaweed salad. But I had to wait a long time to board the cruise to Ly Son Island. It depresses me tremendously. Anyway, everything was OK since the wait had been worthwhile. How about you? Please respond as soon as possible.
Dear Daisy,

How are you doing? I'm writing to inform you about my recent vacation in
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Quang
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Ngai
, my hometown. I spent a couple of weeks there with my family. We stay in a peaceful and attractive village surrounded by spectacular mountain scenery. We went exploring and
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saw
the Mai Son pagodas, the
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Tra
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Khuc
river, and other attractions.
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We
also
took a speedboat cruise to
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Ly
Son Island, where we swam in the stunning blue water and ate local delicacies including jellyfish salad, seaweed salad.
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But
I had to wait a long time to board the cruise to
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Ly
Son Island. It depresses me
tremendously
. Anyway, everything was OK since the wait had been worthwhile. How about you?
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Please
respond as
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soon
as possible.
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IELTS letter write an email to your friend aboau your last holiday and the problem you had

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  American English
2 paragraphs
125 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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