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A latter to the manager of delivery company

A latter to the manager of delivery company p1Bdy
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to you regarding the delivery that you made in my house yesterday. I have some issues and I want to see some actions from your side. Due to the contract, you were willing to deliver my staff in the house by the following address: Washington str. 5/12, I do not know how, but during the delivery or in some other way your employees broke the door of the fridge. The old yellow fridge that I bought at an exclusive auction was terribly damaged, there is a big scratch on it and dirt on the whole external side. I want you to refund me expenses to recover it or buy the new one with the same characteristics. If you have other options to resolve my problem, I am open to contact via email or phone. Please answer as possible as you can, because it gives me a lot of inconvenience. Best wishes, Yevhenii K.
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to you regarding the delivery that you made in my
house
yesterday. I have
some
issues and I want to
see
some
actions from your side.

Due to the contract, you were willing to deliver my staff in the
house
by the following address: Washington
str
. 5/12, I do not know how,
but
during the delivery or in
some
other way your employees broke the door of the fridge. The
old
yellow fridge that I
bought
at an exclusive auction was
terribly
damaged, there is a
big
scratch on it and dirt
on the whole
external side.

I want you to refund me expenses to recover it or
buy
the new one with the same characteristics. If you have other options to resolve my problem, I am open to contact via email or phone.
Please
answer as possible as you can,
because
it gives me
a lot of
inconvenience.

Best wishes,

Yevhenii
K.
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IELTS letter A latter to the manager of delivery company

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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