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Letter of replay to a friend

Letter of replay to a friend 6aekG
Thanks for your email, I'm so glad to hear a good news from you. Unforunately, also I got flu last month. A lot of people nowadays are getting sick maybe because of the covid pandemic. Hope you get better soon! My family and me are really fine. My sister has already started high school classes and she has been feeling comfortable and confident (in her new scholl as I told you). However, there are a group of girls that she hasn't matched with them. About your conference in Barcelona, I'm so happy to hear that you are coming. If you don't want to spend too much money, I recommend staying in Campanile hotel. Of course we can meet when you arrive, I'll be able to show you different sites and incredible delicious restaurants. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Please give my best wishes to your brother and parents. Lots of love, SuePS Please dont forget to bring cash with you, you'll need it for some shops that not accept card payments.
Thanks for your email, I'm
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so
glad to hear a
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good
news from you.
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Unforunately
,
also
I
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got
flu last month.
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A lot of
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people
nowadays are getting sick maybe
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because
of the
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covid
pandemic. Hope you
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get
better
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soon
! My family and
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me
are
really
fine. My sister has already
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started
high school
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classes and
she has been feeling comfortable and confident (in her new
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scholl
as I
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told
you).
However
, there are a
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group
of girls that she hasn't matched with them. About your conference in Barcelona, I'm
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so
happy to hear that you are coming. If you don't want to spend too much money, I recommend staying in Campanile hotel. Of
The comma is probably missing here: "course, we".
course we
can
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meet
when you arrive, I'll be able to
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show
you
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different
sites and incredible delicious restaurants. Looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.
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Please
give my best wishes to your brother and parents. Lots of
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love
,
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SuePS
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Please
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dont
forget to bring cash with you, you'll need it for
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some
shops that not accept card payments.
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IELTS letter Letter of replay to a friend

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
173 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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