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Write a letter to the Planning Manager of your local council about a historical building in your area that is about to be pulled down due to the lack of money to repair it.

Write a letter to the Planning Manager of your local council about a historical building in your area that is about to be pulled down due to the lack of money to repair it. wK6br
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter with regards to the renovation of historical building located in Kottayam as it has been diminishing since last maintenance. As per the expertise opinion, this building may not withstand coming winter, so we need to act now or else we lose one of the great monuments built in the time of Mughal dynasty which is known for its architectural design. Since this ancient structure is a tourist attraction, many people rely on it for their day-to-day life. Moreover, in the last season at least 1000 tourists visited this place and generated a revenue of 50000 rupees which shows its significance. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could propose an action plan to the council for an immediate repairment. Furthermore, I would like to inform that there are no other such tourist destinations in this area which would prove to be one of the reasons for we need to act quickly, else we may lose tourist’s interest in our place. Kindly consider my humble request and do the needful as soon as possible so that we can maintain our tressure. Yours faithfully, Name
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
with regards to
the renovation of historical building located in
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Kottayam
as it has been diminishing since last maintenance.

As per the expertise opinion, this building may not withstand coming winter,
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so
we need to act
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
or else we lose one of the great monuments built in the time of Mughal dynasty which
is known
for its architectural design. Since this ancient structure is a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tourist
attraction,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
rely on it for their day-to-day life.
Moreover
, in the last season at least 1000
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tourists
visited this place and generated a revenue of 50000 rupees which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
its significance.
Therefore
, I would be grateful if you could propose an action plan to the council for an immediate repairment.

Furthermore
, I would like to inform that there are no other such
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tourist
destinations in this area which would prove to be one of the reasons for we need to act
quickly
, else we may lose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tourist’s
interest in our place.

Kindly consider my humble request and do the needful as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that we can maintain our
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tressure
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Name
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the Planning Manager of your local council about a historical building in your area that is about to be pulled down due to the lack of money to repair it.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
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