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you wish to enroll in a course at an australian college. you have already written a letter to the college asking for information.

you wish to enroll in a course at an australian college. you have already written a letter to the college asking for information. WERrq

Dear sir, I am writing to inform you that I am concern because the course will start in less than two months, I need to know if you can still enroll me. In this case, I should send my documents and do my university work. please, do not hesitate to contact me, and if you accept me, I also require further information about the course. Besides, if you could send me the costs of one semester that are related to my English course. additionally, whether the certificate you offer at the end of the course will be sufficient qualification for me, teach English at a prestigious university in Canada. I look forward to hearing from you. please take this issue seriously. thank you. Yours Sincerely, Atiye Rohani

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