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you recently had bought a new computer. Now it is not working properly. write a letter to a shop assistan and explain this situation.

you recently had bought a new computer. Now it is not working properly. write a letter to a shop assistan and explain this situation. awGad

Dear sir. I am writing to complain about cutting – edge computer which I bought 2 days ago. After only 2 days, thing started to go wrong. On the 15th April I invited to your colossal supermarket where is located in the center of your town in order to buy a new computer. When I was looking around the market, I asked a shop assistant about a number of computers. Owing to the fact that, it was my sister’s birthday party. Consequently that reason, I decided to buy the costliest new one for present. Undoubtedly, she made a call me. When she used the computer for the first time, it worked properly. However, then the sound’s was not obvious. I anxious about this situation. As well as it made me unhappy. In addition this, there was a tiny crash on the corner of computer. I would like you to replace the computer with well function one. Otherwise, unfortunately, I shall addressed to the Costume Service Association which is responsible for this problem. Yours faithfully Jack Robinson.

Dear sir.

I am writing to complain about cutting Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
–
 edge computer which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 2 days ago. After This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 2 days, thing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to go This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
. On the 15th April I invited to your colossal supermarket where is located
 in the center of your town in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a new computer. When I was looking around the market, I asked a shop assistant about a number of computers. Owing to the fact that, it was my sister’s birthday party. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Consequently,
Consequently
 that reason, I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 the costliest new one for present. Undoubtedly
, she made a call me. When she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 the computer for the first
 time, it worked properly
. However
, then the sound’s was not obvious. I anxious about this situation. As well
 as it made me unhappy. In Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?addition,
addition
 this, there was a tiny crash on the corner of computer.

I would like you to replace the computer with well function one. Otherwise
, unfortunately, I shall The verb 'shall' requires the base form of the verb: "address"address
addressed
 to the Costume Service Association which is responsible for this problem.

Yours faithfully
 Jack Robinson. 