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write an emial to reply teacher's invitaion to joining sports day

write an emial to reply teacher's invitaion to joining sports day G3GWw

Dear Mr. Grenn, I have received your email in the morning but I was so sorry because I could not reply to it sooner. That is a good idea if you organize a school sports day on 23 June. This is a chance for me to meet everyone and participate. In my opinion, I think running race is better than a football tournament. Because it is suitable for everyone even girls while a football tournament may be more interesting for boys. Small prizes will be a good choice. It encourages participants a lot. I think we are really excited if we become winners and get gifts. The more people, the more happiness. I think you should send an email to invite parents to the sports day. Their appearances are a big motivation for us who attend the competition. Thank you for inviting me to join your event. I certainly participate in and make an effort to win. Love! Thao

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 everyone and participate. In my opinion, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
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. I certainly
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 an effort to win.

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Love
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