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The importance to celebrate the end of the school year

The importance to celebrate the end of the school year K3gLk

Dear Mrs. Smith, I am writing to you in order to discuss about the next celebration at the end of the year. I would like to share with you some ideas concerning all the organization. Although the Covid-19 pandemic has broken out in our lives like a hurricane, I frankly think that we should celebrate this important moment of our school life. Further, I would suggest you something to do. Since that the party will be at the end of June, a good idea would be to arrange a trip to the beach with other classrooms. Due to online teaching, it has been a while that we do not see each other. Then, in the afternoon, we could go downtown to a fairground visit. Finally, we can have an aperitif in a cheerful atmosphere. I hope that you will consider my reflections about the party. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Amanda

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