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Write a letter sympathy your accident

Write a letter sympathy your accident x0EO6
am writing letter to you because I hear about your mother accident. It was terrible to to you and I symparthy about accident on this situation. I am really to shocked when heard that from your neigbourhood. I believe now is the time to stay awake in order to get through everything. I hope your mother recovers quickly, and remember that rest, take care of yourself is the best medicine. Moreover, feel free to contact me whenever you need anything. Wishes to your mother and I hope see you soon. Best wishes, Nhung
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am
writing letter to you
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because
I hear about your mother accident. It was terrible
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to to
you and I
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symparthy
about accident on this situation. I am
really
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to
shocked when heard that from your
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neigbourhood
.

I believe
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now
is the time to stay awake in order to
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get
through everything.
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I
hope your mother recovers
quickly
, and remember that rest, take care of yourself is the best medicine.

Moreover
, feel free to contact me whenever you need anything.

Wishes to your mother and I hope
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see
you
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soon
.

Best wishes,

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Nhung
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IELTS letter Write a letter sympathy your accident

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
92 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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