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A friend who lives in another city has invited you to an event. You are unable to accept the invitation.

A friend who lives in another city has invited you to an event. You are unable to accept the invitation. 0M9jG

Dear Anthony, Hi! How are you? I hope you and the rest of the family are doing well. By the way nice caught up with you last week; we should do that more often. However, about your invitation, I’m afraid I can’t afford to come for now because since I had my prior commitment. B1- I was ecstatic when I read your invitation. Thanks a lot for inviting me to your thanksgiving dinner party. I’ve extremely wanted to visit you there and explore the majestic city of Singapore, but somehow, I don’t think I can make it, because of my prior commitment to my sister. Do you remember my eldest sister Theodora? She'll be celebrating her 50th birthday, next Monday, and it’s a shame it will fall on the same date as your invitation. B2- Anyhow, if you are not busy over the weekend. Why don’t you come to my place for dinner or perhaps let's instead have lunch out, in our favorite Asian restaurant, then there is a new cinema open nearby, so I can make it up with you? I can’t wait for your reply, and I want to share a piece of good news guess what! I got my promotion the long I'd been waiting for is paid off! It would be very exciting, I remember those days when we are going out, full of happy memories. You can just give me a buzz at any time. I’ll hope to see you soon and have a nice day. Warm wishes, Maya

Dear Anthony,

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 and have a nice day.

Warm wishes,

Maya