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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to enquire about the medical volunteering in Cambodia that has been advertised on your website. As a medical student, I would be very interested in participating in this program, and I would be grateful if you could give me some further details. Firstly, according to your website, there is a minimum duration of four weeks; however, the maximum duration of the programme is not mentioned. I would appreciate it if you could tell me whether it is possible to have extended stays, since I would like to work in one of your hospitals for a period of over six months. Secondly, you also inform that only students in their 4th year of medical school can be accepted as volunteers. In my case, I have just finished my 3rd year and I would like to know if I can already be considered a 4th year student. Finally, I would appreciate some information about accommodation. Could you please tell me if volunteers are offered a room in a shared house? And if that is so, would you mind telling me if electricity, running water and WIFI are provided? I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you to
enquire
about the medical volunteering in Cambodia that has
been advertised
on your website. As a medical student, I would be
very
interested in participating in this program, and I would be grateful if you could give me
some
further
details
.

Firstly
, according to your website, there is a minimum duration of four weeks;
however
, the maximum duration of the
programme
is not mentioned. I would appreciate it if you could
tell
me whether it is possible to have extended stays, since I would like to work in one of your hospitals for a period of over six months.

Secondly
, you
also
inform that
only
students in their 4th year of medical school can be
accepted
as volunteers. In my case, I have
just
finished my 3rd year and I would like to know if I can already
be considered
a 4th year student.

Finally
, I would appreciate
some
information about accommodation. Could you
please
tell
me if volunteers
are offered
a room in a shared
house
? And if
that is
so
, would you mind telling me if electricity, running water and
WIFI
are provided
?

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter medical volunteering in Cambodia

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  American English
7 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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