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• explain why you need that job • give details of what you can do for the company • suggest the time that you can work.

• explain why you need that job • give details of what you can do for the company • suggest the time that you can work. nXmge

Dear Sir/Madam, I am George Singer residing in Hathway Street, London. I am a student at the Leeds College of Arts. I hail from a middle class family and I got some scholarships to study in college. But I did not qualify for the scholarship in the second year. So I am looking for a part time job to pay my fees. I learnt from one of my friends that there is a vacancy available in the design department of your company. Since I live nearby, it will be easy for me to commute. As I studied Creative Arts as a subject in the first year, I would be of great help to your creative studios section. I can design creative logos, write engaging content for your company newsletters, and help in producing quality videos. I would be able to work in the Digital design division as well. Since I have to attend college in the day, it would be convenient for me to work in the evenings and weekends. I would prefer to work between 6 PM to 1 AM. Please be considerate and offer the part-time opportunity. Yours sincerely George Singer

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am George Singer residing in Possible spelling mistake found.PathwayHathawayHatchwayHath way
Hathway
 Street, London. I am a student at the Leeds College of Arts. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hail from a middle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 family and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
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some
 scholarships to study in college. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
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So
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part time
 job to pay my fees. I Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
 from one of my friends that there is a vacancy available in the design department of your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. Since I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 nearby, it will be easy for me to commute.

As I studied Creative Arts as a subject in the first
 year, I would be of great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to your creative studios section. I can design creative logos, write engaging content for your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 newsletters, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in producing quality videos. I would be able to work in the Digital design division as well
.

Since I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 attend college in the day, it would be convenient for me to work in the evenings and weekends. I would prefer to work between 6 PM to 1 AM.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 be considerate and offer the part-time opportunity.

Yours sincerely


George Singer