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Dear Mr. X, I would like to express you my gratitude for the organization of my birthday party. Your restaurant was always my favorite one but I could never imagine that you would make the event so stunning. All my guests and I enjoyed it very much. The food was adorable, the service was excellent. The song that waiters sang at the end made me cry. We ordered some starters and all of them were really tasty (and thank you for the advice to order not more than four portions). My guests ordered meet and fish as a main dish and I would like to mention that these dishes were also excellent. The only thing that could be improved was that they served Champaign quite warm. Let me, Mr. X, express one more time my appreciation and I wish you a huge success in your business. I am sure that I will come very soon again. Best regards, Stanislava
Dear Mr. X,

I would like to express you my gratitude for the organization of my birthday party. Your restaurant was always my favorite one
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I could never imagine that you would
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make
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event
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so
stunning. All my guests and I enjoyed it
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very
much.

The food was adorable, the service was excellent. The song that waiters sang at the
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end
made me cry. We ordered
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starters and all of them were
really
tasty (and thank you for the advice to order not more than four portions).

My guests ordered
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meet
and fish as a main dish and I would like to mention that these dishes were
also
excellent.

The
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only
thing that could be
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improved
was that they served Champaign quite warm.

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Let
me, Mr. X, express one more time my appreciation and I wish you a huge success in your business. I am sure that I will
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come
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very
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again.

Best regards,

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Stanislava

IELTS letter Write a letter to your favourite restaurant.

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158 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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