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Write an appology for not partisapating in the party

Write an appology for not partisapating in the party rG9NJ
Dear Mariah I am writing to owe your apology for not attending your silver wedding party. If I were in your shoes I would be so angry either. I was willingly wanted to go there, but unfortunately I cannot. I feel so sorry about this, yet I have a worthful alibi for that. The reason is that, I was wandering around all shops in order to find proper present for your ceremony but unfortunately I cannot to find any. So I decided to go center of the city in order to find out your lovely jewelry shop. After purchasing luminous necklace decided to return my home but due to bad weather the roads were very awful. So cannot get your party in time. I hope you will accept my apology and I promise going to yours as soon as possible with my present. See you soon my lovely Mariah Love Iroda
Dear Mariah

I am writing to owe your apology for not attending your silver wedding party. If I were in your shoes I would be
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angry either. I was
willingly
wanted to go there,
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but
unfortunately I cannot. I feel
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sorry about this,
yet
I have a
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worthful
alibi for that.

The reason is that, I was wandering around all shops in order to find proper present for your ceremony
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but
unfortunately I cannot to find any.
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So
I decided to go center of the city in order to find out your lovely jewelry shop. After purchasing luminous necklace decided to return my home
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but
due to
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bad
weather the roads were
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very
awful.
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cannot
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get
your party in time.

I hope you will accept my apology and I promise going to yours as
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soon
as possible with my present.
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See
you
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my lovely
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Mariah


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Love
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Iroda

IELTS letter Write an appology for not partisapating in the party

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