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Request a week off on the course

Request a week off on the course 3be15
Dear Sir, My name is Shayne Ong, I am a 3rd year student of Accounting and Finance. I am writing to request for a week off from 1st May to 7th May 2021. Understand that the first week of May is the examination week. However, I have to take a week off due to unforeseen circumstances. Yesterday, I was informed by my parents in Malaysia that my grandparents have both passed away due to Covid complications. Hence, I would like to take a week off to attend their funeral, furthermore to provide moral support to my parent as well. The funeral is expected to last for 5 days, thus I would therefore like to take a 7 days off, taking into consideration the duration of inbound and outbound flights. I deeply appreciate your consideration of the above matter, please allow me to re-schedule my exams fall within that week as well. I have in total three exams in that week which two being multiple choice exams and one written exam. Kindly advise the possible alternatives on the arrangement of the exams. Apologize for inconvenient caused. Sincerely, Shayne
Dear Sir, My name is
Shayne
Ong
, I am a 3rd year student of Accounting and Finance. I am writing to request for a
week
off
from 1st May to 7th May 2021. Understand that the
first
week
of May is the examination
week
.
However
, I
have to
take a
week
off
due to unforeseen circumstances. Yesterday, I
was informed
by my parents in Malaysia that my grandparents have both passed away due to
Covid
complications.
Hence
, I would like to take a
week
off
to attend their funeral,
furthermore
to provide moral support to my parent
as well
. The funeral is
expected
to last for 5 days,
thus
I would
therefore
like to take a 7 days
off
, taking into consideration the duration of inbound and outbound flights. I
deeply
appreciate your consideration of the above matter,
please
allow
me to re-schedule my exams fall within that
week
as well
. I have in total three exams in that
week
which two being multiple choice exams and one written exam. Kindly advise the possible alternatives on the arrangement of the exams. Apologize for inconvenient caused.

Sincerely
,
Shayne
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IELTS letter Request a week off on the course

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
186 words
5.5
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