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Write a letter to the hotel. In the letter describe the problem at the hotel explain what the manager had said at the time say what you want the manager to do.

Write a letter to the hotel. In the letter describe the problem at the hotel explain what the manager had said at the time say what you want the manager to do. RRL98
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the issue on your hotel room, which I booked before. I think that, may be you have confuse or mistake about arrange my room, which I book last week directly. This is because I receive a different room with the one you promise. At that time, I call to your hotel’s receptionist to book a double balcony room with two queen size bed, he tell me that kind of room is out of room, and then he let me contact with you, who was current hotel manager. And then, you promise me changing my room to another double room with wide ocean view windows. But to day, I receive a different room with one king-size bed and without windows or balcony. I hope you can solve this problem as soon as possible, such as move my family to another room and charge a little fee, because my wife and my daughter need and airy room with at least one window or balcony. I hope this matter will receive your immediate attetion. Yours faithfully, Sdk
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the issue on your hotel
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
, which I booked
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before
.

I
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think
that,
Did you mean "maybe" (= perhaps)?
may be
you have
Use past participle here: "confused".
confuse
or mistake about arrange my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
, which I book last week
directly
. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I receive a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
with the one you promise.

At that time, I call to your hotel’s receptionist to book a double balcony
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room
with two queen size bed, he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "tells", "told".
tell
me that kind of
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room
is out of
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room
, and then he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me contact with you, who was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
hotel manager. And then, you promise me changing my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
to another double
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
with wide ocean view windows.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
to day, I receive a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
with one king-size bed and without windows or balcony.

I hope you can solve this problem as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible, such as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
my family to another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
and charge a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
fee,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
my wife and my daughter need and airy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
with at least one window or balcony.

I hope this matter will receive your immediate
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attetion
.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Sdk
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the hotel. In the letter describe the problem at the hotel explain what the manager had said at the time say what you want the manager to do.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
187 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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