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Apology letter to neighbor for noise

Apology letter to neighbor for noise 6ae8x
Dear Mr. JohnPlease accept my sincerely apology for the all the noise coming from my flat last night. I had no intention of being so loud and I feel terrible that I interrupted your evening or woke you up. Firstly, let me to explain a little that we had a birthday party so we decided to invite all the relatives and close friends to come the house because we had not seen each other for a long time. As you know, friends were too thrilled in the party, they sang songs and danced with loud music with Little attention that it was late of night. I should say that we were very sorry about the disturbance to your rest at night, we were not thoughtful but we truly didn't mean to bother our neighbors. I will promise this will not happen again such a family activity we would surely take it outside instead of holding at home next time. Please accept my apologies once again. Yours sincerely Nargiza.
Dear Mr.
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JohnPlease
accept my
sincerely
apology for the all the noise coming from my flat last night. I had no intention of being
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so
loud and I feel terrible that I interrupted your evening or woke you up.
Firstly
,
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let
me to
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explain
a
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little
that we had a birthday party
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so
we decided to invite all the relatives and close friends to
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come
the
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house
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because
we had not
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seen
each other for a long time. As you know, friends were too thrilled in the party, they sang songs and danced with loud music with
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Little
attention that it was late of night. I should say that we were
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very
sorry about the disturbance to your rest at night, we were not thoughtful
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but
we
truly
didn't mean to bother our neighbors. I will promise this will not happen again such a family activity we would
surely
take it outside
instead
of holding at home
next
time.
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Please
accept my apologies once again. Yours
sincerely
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Nargiza
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IELTS letter Apology letter to neighbor for noise

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
168 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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