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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding your article about comparing town centers in Iran. The article was interesting, however, the conclusion was not accurate. In the first place, Iranian cities have some similarities such as governmental offices, official divisions, and in general, public sectors. However, there are several variations among these centers. First of all, the weather is quite different in several parts of Iran, and based on it, the population would be different from place to place. More than that, the cultural differences are significant in different parts of Iran. I will be pleased of you come to our city and take a tour of the city and realize the variations. Yours sincerely,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding your article about comparing town centers in Iran. The article was interesting, however, the conclusion was not accurate. In the first place, Iranian cities have some similarities such as governmental offices, official divisions, and in general, public sectors. However, there are several variations among these centers. First of all, the weather is quite different in several parts of Iran, and based on it, the population would be different from place to place. More than that, the cultural differences are significant in different parts of Iran. I will be pleased of you come to our city and take a tour of the city and realize the variations. Yours sincerely, PRoQw
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding your article about comparing town centers in Iran. The article was interesting, however, the conclusion was not accurate. In the first place, Iranian cities have some similarities such as governmental offices, official divisions, and in general, public sectors. However, there are several variations among these centers. First of all, the weather is quite different in several parts of Iran, and based on it, the population would be different from place to place. More than that, the cultural differences are significant in different parts of Iran. I will be pleased of you come to our city and take a tour of the city and realize the variations. Yours sincerely,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing regarding your article about comparing town centers in Iran. The article was interesting,
however
, the conclusion was not accurate.

In the
first
place, Iranian cities have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
similarities such as governmental offices, official divisions, and
in general
, public sectors.

However
, there are several variations among these centers.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, the weather is quite
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
in several parts of Iran, and based on it, the population would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
from place to place. More than that, the cultural differences are significant in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
parts of Iran.

I will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
of you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to our city and take a tour of the city and realize the variations.

Yours
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding your article about comparing town centers in Iran. The article was interesting, however, the conclusion was not accurate. In the first place, Iranian cities have some similarities such as governmental offices, official divisions, and in general, public sectors. However, there are several variations among these centers. First of all, the weather is quite different in several parts of Iran, and based on it, the population would be different from place to place. More than that, the cultural differences are significant in different parts of Iran. I will be pleased of you come to our city and take a tour of the city and realize the variations. Yours sincerely,

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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