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You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours

You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours Vly8O

Dear Stephen, I hope you and your family are all well! I had a great time with you last week. It felt great to catch up with you and know your family and have fun together. Anyway, I'm writing to let you know that I have decided to sell some of my furniture and I thought you might be interested to purchase it. I am trying to sell my furniture because I am moving to Vancouver, Canada as I recently got a job there. I do not want to shift them all the way to the city as moving them internationally is not only expensive but also unnecessary as my accommodation is already fully furnished and has no extra room to put them. These are some of the furniture I am selling. A large dining table, made of mahogany, a coffee table and a few chairs, made of oak wood and a couple of sofa chairs. I feel that you would like the furniture since they are in good condition and the prices are very reasonable. You can come anytime you want, preferably within the next week and inspect the furniture. If you feel that they are right for you, you can buy it. Warm wishes, Mohammed Waseem

Dear Stephen,

I hope you and your family are all well! I had a great time with you last week. It felt great to catch up with you and know your family and have fun together. Anyway, I'm writing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that I have decided to sell This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssofaappliancebedcouchequipment
furniture
 and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 you might be interested
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 it.

I am trying to sell my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssofaappliancebedcouchequipment
furniture
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I am moving to Vancouver, Canada as I recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a job there. I do not want to shift them all the way to the city as moving them internationally
 is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 expensive This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 unnecessary as my accommodation is already fully
 furnished and has no extra room to put them.

These are If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssofaappliancebedcouchequipment
furniture
 I am selling. A large dining table, made of mahogany, a coffee table and a few chairs, made of oak wood and a couple of sofa chairs. I feel that you would like the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssofaappliancebedcouchequipment
furniture
 since they are in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 condition and the prices are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 reasonable.

You can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 anytime you want, preferably
 within the next
 week and inspect the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssofaappliancebedcouchequipment
furniture
. If you feel that they are right for you, you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 it.

Warm wishes,

Mohammed Possible spelling mistake found.SeemWasteWashedWastedWastesWasher
Waseem