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Writing a letter to a friend asking for help with a short holiday in the area of this friend, asking for information, etc.

Writing a letter to a friend asking for help with a short holiday in the area of this friend, asking for information, etc. 1akXN

Dear Elina, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. I'm writing this letter to enquire about the places of your city as I'll be coming to your area with my family for one week. As I'm working in an IT company, due to the fact I don't have an abundance of time to go somewhere. It has been so long since we all went on a trip. However, this time I will take a one week off from my busy schedule and want to utilize this time to see all the sightseeing places in your area. Firstly, I would like to know how the weather would be like next month? Secondly, It would be great if you suggest places where we can visit, as you have been living there for five years. Moreover, recommend a good resort aslo, which has better facilities of food and rooms. I would like to make this trip memorable for my family. Furthermore, spend some time with you and revive the nostalgic moments that we spent together in college. Anyway, I can't wait to see you. Yours faithfully,

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Elina
,

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enquire
 about the places of your city as I'll be coming to your area with my family for one week.

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company
, due to the fact I don't have an abundance of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 to go somewhere. It has been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 long since we all went on a trip. However
, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 off from my busy schedule and want to utilize this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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see
 all the sightseeing places in your area. Firstly
, I would like to know how the weather would be like next
 month?

Secondly
, It would be great if you suggest places where we can visit, as you have been living there for five years. Moreover
, recommend a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 resort Possible spelling mistake found.alsoOsloALOASLASLMSLO
aslo
, which has better facilities of food and rooms. I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 this trip memorable for my family. Furthermore
, spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 with you and revive the nostalgic moments that we spent together in college.

Anyway, I can't wait to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you.

Yours faithfully
, 