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request letter to authorities for additional sports facilities

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Dear sir, My name is Harmanjot Kaur resident of Brampton, Ontario. I am working as front-desk employee in food company. No doubt, the sport area is quite wider in my sector, but there are some sport facilities that should be provided in this zone. I am writing this letter to request you to add sports facilities to this region. Presently, many people such as elder people, youngsters as well as children do physical activities there. youngsters play various kinds of games like cricket, volleyball, football as well as children play freeze tag. However, there is no facility for people who are working as after office hours can do any sports. Sir, there is a ground next to school which is under municipal community. Presently, people is using that section as dumping area and throwing waste material over there. This place would be an ideal for indoor stadium. I would like to recommend you that spot should be used for sports section. This would benefit not only for young office goers but also for children, youth. We can do various kinds of exercise. Nowadays people have very hectic schedule, so physical activities are very imperative for health. Hoping for careful consideration of this suggestion. Yours faithfully, Harmanjot kaur.
Dear sir,

My name is
Harmanjot
Kaur
resident of Brampton, Ontario. I am working as front-desk employee in food
company
. No doubt, the
sport
area is quite wider in my sector,
but
there are
some
sport
facilities that should
be provided
in this zone. I am writing this letter to request you to
add
sports
facilities to this region.

Presently
,
many
people
such as elder
people
, youngsters
as well
as children do physical activities there.
youngsters
play various kinds of games like cricket, volleyball, football
as well
as children play freeze tag.
However
, there is no facility for
people
who are working as after office hours can do any sports.

Sir, there is a ground
next
to school which is under municipal community.
Presently
,
people
is
using that section as dumping area and throwing waste material over there. This place would be an ideal for indoor stadium. I would like to recommend you that spot should be
used
for
sports
section.

This would benefit not
only
for young office goers
but
also
for children, youth. We can do various kinds of exercise. Nowadays
people
have
very
hectic schedule,
so
physical activities are
very
imperative for health.

Hoping for careful consideration of this suggestion.

Yours
faithfully
,

Harmanjot
kaur
.
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IELTS letter request letter to authorities for additional sports facilities

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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