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Hello everyone, My name is Aung Khant Naing. I'm 18 years old and I live in North Okkalapa Township. I love to boring and watching anime. And I am not good at social relations. I'm a first year of Dagon University. And I also design the advertising poster. I love to sleep. I have six family members. My sister and brother are married. And I am the youngest in my family. I am happy to do what I want. That's all.
Hello everyone, My name is
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Aung
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Khant
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Naing
. I'm 18 years
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and I
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live
in North
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Okkalapa
Township. I
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love
to boring and watching anime. And I am not
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good
at social relations. I'm a
first
year of Dagon University.

And I
also
design the advertising poster. I
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love
to sleep. I have six family members. My sister and brother
are married
. And I am the youngest in my family. I am happy to do what I want. That's all.
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  American English
2 paragraphs
81 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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