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Write a thank you letter to the manager of restaurant

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my boundless sincere thanks to the manager of your company. Last week my friends and I decided to celebrate a birthday of our collegue. Therefore, we planned to have a great day in your restaurant, which was recommended by our boss. In fact, when we got there, we were suprised. The workers greeted us sincerely and chose the best the room, which was convenient, broad and cool. My friends and I were very much grateful to both the waiter and waitress who served us delicious meals and drinks. They behaved very politely and delivered everything that was ordered immediately. Please forward my heartfelt thankfulness to them. We felt very much proud of your company for having such reasonable employees. I hope that your restaurant woud reward such industrious workers. Yours sincerely, Anna
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my boundless sincere thanks to the manager of your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

Last week my friends and I decided to celebrate a birthday of our
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collegue
.
Therefore
, we planned to have a great day in your restaurant, which
was recommended
by our boss. In fact, when we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
there, we were
Possible spelling mistake found.
suprised
. The workers greeted us
sincerely
and chose the best the room, which was convenient, broad and cool.

My friends and I were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much grateful to both the waiter and waitress who served us delicious meals and drinks. They behaved
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
politely
and delivered everything that
was ordered
immediately.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
forward my heartfelt thankfulness to them. We felt
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much proud of your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
for having such reasonable employees.

I hope that your restaurant
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woud
reward such industrious workers.

Yours
sincerely
,

Anna
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IELTS letter Write a thank you letter to the manager of restaurant

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
142 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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