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Write a report to the manager of your company about staff productivity. You must: • Report on findings. • Comment on staff’s views. • Recommend solutions. • Suggest consulting an expert. Write between 100 and 150 words

Write a report to the manager of your company about staff productivity. You must: • Report on findings. • Comment on staff’s views. • Recommend solutions. • Suggest consulting an expert. Write between 100 and 150 words QKwlb

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this report to you because I want to introduce about the productivity of staff and a few things to tell you. n my opinion there is no problem with the staff. If there was any problem, I think it could be easily solved. I have found that production is proceeding at a pace that is appropriate. According to the staff, however, this pace is a bit fast and they would need more time to produce a particular product. The solution, I think, would be to give more time to develop a particular product, so there would be less error and staff would be satisfied. Last but not least, I would ask that the expert be consulted. Can you tell me how could be solved? I look forward to hearing from you! Your faithfully, Boglárka Apostol

Dear Sir/Madam,

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because
 I want to introduce about the productivity of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforcepersonnelteamwork forcecrewcadre
staff
 and a few things to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you.

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n
 my opinion there is no problem with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforcepersonnelteamwork forcecrewcadre
staff
. If there was any problem, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it could be easily
 solved. I have found that production is proceeding at a pace that is
 appropriate.

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staff
, however
, this pace is a bit Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).fast, and
fast and
 they would need more time to produce a particular product. The solution, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
, would be to give more time to develop a particular product, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 there would be less error and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforcepersonnelteamwork forcecrewcadre
staff
 would be satisfied
.

Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, I would ask that the expert be consulted
. Can you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me how could be solved
?

I look forward to hearing from you!

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Your
faithfully
,

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Boglárka
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Apostol