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Write a reply to Natalie. In your email, you have to express your excitement of her trip

Write a reply to Natalie. In your email, you have to express your excitement of her trip jDm0w
Dear Natalie, It's great to hear that you will come and stay with me on your next-month trip. I'm sure you will not regret this decision. We will have a wonderful time. The way to get to my apartment from the airport is not complicated. You just need to take a bus which has number 120. It is the cheapest means of transport in my country. After about an hour, the bus will reach Ben Thanh station, I will pick you up there. Summer is coming and the weather will be very hot. You should bring summer clothes and don't forget swimsuits, we will go to the beach. Well, that's all for now. I'm looking forward to meeting you. Love, Tuyen.
Dear Natalie, It's great to hear that you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
and stay with me on your
next
-month trip. I'm sure you will not regret this decision. We will have a wonderful time. The way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
to my apartment from the airport is not complicated. You
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
need to take a bus which has number 120. It is the cheapest means of transport in my country. After about an hour, the bus will reach Ben Thanh station, I will pick you up there. Summer is coming and the weather will be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
hot. You should bring summer clothes and don't forget swimsuits, we will go to the beach. Well, that's all for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
. I'm looking forward to meeting you.
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Love
,
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Tuyen
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IELTS letter Write a reply to Natalie. In your email, you have to express your excitement of her trip

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  American English
1 paragraphs
121 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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