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Recycling process of aluminum cans.

Recycling process of aluminum cans. K3r70

The pictorial diagram demonstrates few steps of recycling the aluminum cans spanning from collection to recycling with necessary tools. It is apparent in the given process chart that first of all it’s started with the collection of some used cans from various areas. The collected cans cleaned, sorted, shredded and compressed with the help of machine. In the second step, compressed cans are heated and melted in high temperature. Taking into account rest of the information, the aluminum is rolled out to a thickens of 2. 5mm to 6mm. Afterwards, aluminum is ready to reuse and convert in the form of cans. The final and last step is about distribution of recycled products. The picture illustrates that 74% of drink products recycled in United Kingdom. All in all, it is limpid that there are seven stages of recycling which starts from collection and with sold out of drink products such as coca cola, Pepsi and many more.

The pictorial diagram demonstrates few steps of recycling the aluminum You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
 spanning from collection to recycling with necessary tools.

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started
 with the collection of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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used
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cans
 from various areas. The collected You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
 cleaned, sorted, shredded and compressed with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of machine. In the second step, compressed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
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are heated
 and melted in high temperature.

Taking into account rest of the information, the aluminum is rolled
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5mm
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6mm
. Afterwards, aluminum is ready to reuse and convert in the form of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
. The final and last step You should probably use "am", "are", "aren".amarearen
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 more. 