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you just received an email from robert, an exchange student. he will be attending your school for a term

you just received an email from robert, an exchange student. he will be attending your school for a term jDmkd

Dear Robert, I am glad to receive your email. I would answer some information about my school. As for the computer lab, where is quiet and convenient helps you concentrate to study. It can connect to the internet and you could access to find everything. There is 50 computer in a room and it opened from 7 am to 10 pm every day. Next, We have many after-school activities. You could take part in clubs such as skill club, language club, and dance club. It is very interesting. Finally, I take part in a language club which helps me practice speaking English very well. Besides, You can meet people who are friendly and have a sense of humor. Nice to welcome you to this club. Hope to hear from you very soon. Best wishes, Mai.

Dear Robert,

I am glad to receive your email. I would answer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 information about my school.

As for the computer lab, where is quiet and convenient This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 you concentrate to study. It can connect to the internet and you could access to find everything. There is 50 Possible agreement error. The noun 'computer' seems to be countable, so consider using: "computers".computers
computer
 in a room and it opened from 7 am to 10 pm every day.

Next
, We have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 after-school activities. You could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
clubs
 such as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
, language You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
, and dance You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
. It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 interesting.

Finally
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in a language You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
 which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 me practice speaking English This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well. Besides
, You can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
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people
 who are friendly and have a sense of humor. Nice to welcome you to this club.

Hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Best wishes,

Mai. 