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Dear Admissions Committee, It is my honor to recommend Abduaxatov Feruz for the Undergraduate program at your prestigious University. I have known Abduaxatov Feruz for the past six years, having served as both his Russian language teacher and his supervisor at school. I believe Feruz would be an excellent addition to this University. Abduaxatov Feruz is one of the most exceptional students I have encountered in my whole career of teaching. He puts a great deal of effort and time into learning subjects. He consistently gets excellent scores on his tests and home assignment, and participates in classes regularly. Moreover, he always succeeds in his extra lessons by means of which he gained top scores from international tests such as IELTS and SAT. Feruz is perceptive, sharp and diligent individual with a high aptitude for English and Math. Every year he takes part in school contests and proves himself to be the smartest student of our school by breaking all the records. In spite of his busy schedule, he always balances his time, so he could help everyone who needs assistance and participate in social life of our school. He always participates in school activities, gives speeches and motivates other students. Feruz’s personal characteristics are not limited by self-confidence, motivation and helpfulness. Being a person of high moral principles, Feruz gained a sincere respect of his teachers and entire school. According to his capacious knowledge, erudition, and propensity for learning, Abduaxatov Feruz would be one of the most promising and successful students at this University. Sincerely, Lyudmila Aleksandrovna Gordeeva
Dear Admissions Committee,

It is my honor to recommend
Abduaxatov
Feruz
for the Undergraduate program at your prestigious University.

I have known
Abduaxatov
Feruz
for the past six years, having served as both his Russian language teacher and his supervisor at
school
. I believe
Feruz
would be an excellent addition to this University.

Abduaxatov
Feruz
is one of the most exceptional
students
I have encountered in my whole career of teaching. He puts a great deal of effort and time into learning subjects. He
consistently
gets
excellent scores on his
tests
and home assignment, and participates in classes
regularly
.

Moreover
, he always succeeds in his extra lessons by means of which he gained top scores from international
tests
such as IELTS and SAT.
Feruz
is perceptive, sharp and diligent individual with a high aptitude for English and Math. Every year he
takes part
in
school
contests and proves himself to be the smartest
student
of our
school
by breaking all the records.
In spite of
his busy schedule, he always balances his time,
so
he could
help
everyone who needs assistance and participate in social life of our
school
. He always participates in
school
activities, gives speeches and motivates other
students
.
Feruz
’s personal characteristics are not limited by self-confidence, motivation and helpfulness. Being a person of high moral principles,
Feruz
gained a sincere respect of his teachers and entire school.

According to his capacious knowledge, erudition, and propensity for learning,
Abduaxatov
Feruz
would be one of the most promising and successful
students
at this University.

Sincerely
,

Lyudmila
Aleksandrovna
Gordeeva
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IELTS letter Application for University

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
258 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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