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I recently saw your advertisement about a job as local tour guide. I am writing this letter to apply for the post on your website.

I recently saw your advertisement about a job as local tour guide. I am writing this letter to apply for the post on your website. Wg7b5
Dear Sir/Madam, I recently saw your advertisement about a job as local tour guide. I am writing this letter to apply for the post on your website. I have lived in this town since I was born. Therefore, I have known the history and various places of this town. In my free time, I've frequently travelled with my close friend to explore new things. This is one of my favorite in terms of entertainment. From my perspective, I'm studying at travel and tourism management which provides me a plethora of skills and specialized knowledges. Furthermore, I've had 1 year experiences in this major as a guide for foreign visitors. Almost tourisms have good feedback for me after travelling. I hope you can consider me for this post. And I am looking forward to your respond. Best regard, Kim Anh
Dear Sir/Madam,

I recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
your advertisement about a job as local tour guide. I am writing this letter to apply for the post on your website.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lived
in this town since I
was born
.
Therefore
, I have known the history and various places of this town. In my free time, I've
frequently
travelled with my close friend to explore new things. This is one of my favorite in terms of entertainment. From my perspective, I'm studying at travel and tourism management which provides me a plethora of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and specialized
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knowledges
.
Furthermore
, I've had
When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "1-year"
1 year
experiences in this major as a guide for foreign visitors. Almost
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tourisms have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
feedback for me after travelling.

I hope you can consider me for this post. And I am looking forward to your
Did you mean "response"?
respond
.

A determiner is probably missing here: "the Best".
Best
Did you mean "regards"?
regard
,

Kim
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Anh
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IELTS letter I recently saw your advertisement about a job as local tour guide. I am writing this letter to apply for the post on your website.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
138 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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