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Write a motivation letter to the director of the program which you are applying for.

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Dear Sir/Madam, Allow me first to express my interest in the Orthodontics advanced master program in your esteemed University. My name is Ahmed Al Aji a Brazilian/Syrian Dentist with a Bachelor degree from The International University for Science and Technology in Syria. From the first day of my university life, inspired by my orthodontics professor Dr Muhannad Kazzaz who is an orthodontic-consultant, and from successfully diagnosing my first case as a student, I felt that I have found myself in this field as I enjoyed every aspect of it from taking the intra-oral and extra-oral pictures alongside the radiographic images to putting a proper treatment plan for the malocclusions existed passing to the placement of the Dental Braces/Orthodontic wires and finishing with the removable and fixed retainers at the end of the treatment. Furthermore, your prestigious university has always piqued my interest as it is a top ranked educational establishment with its important rule in graduating students who have a strong base and a sufficient amount of academic knowledge to function properly in the society and to be successful in their own lives as well as benefiting the people and the society around them. And speaking as a Dentist, I feel that completing my ulterior studies with you is a big step for me in terms of academic life and my career as the clinical practice in this course will help me gain the required experience to be a successful Orthodontist and a quality Dentist, and I am sure that] I am the right choice to be considered for this program. In addition to all of that, I have read a lot about Belgium and the life there, It caught my attention for its diversity of cultures from which I can learn a lot from the people there and from their lifestyles. Not forgetting the Dutch language which I find very engaging, enjoyable, and easy to learn and acquire. Studying Orthodontics is Ghent University is an opportunity I would love to dedicate myself too wholeheartedly, and I hope I will be able to contribute to the community the best way I possibly can. I am convinced that I am a valuable addition to the program. I hope to be given a chance, as I am confident that I am capable of meeting and even exceeding your expectations. Thank you for considering my application Yours sincerely Ahmed Al Aji
Dear Sir/Madam,

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Allow
me
first
to express my interest in the Orthodontics advanced master program in your esteemed University.

My name
is Ahmed
Al
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Aji
a Brazilian/Syrian Dentist with a Bachelor degree from The International
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University
for Science and Technology in Syria.

From the
first
day of my
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university
life, inspired by my orthodontics professor Dr
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Muhannad
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Kazzaz
who is an orthodontic-consultant, and from
successfully
diagnosing my
first
case as a student, I felt that I have found myself in this field as I enjoyed every aspect of it from taking the
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intra-oral
and extra-oral pictures alongside the radiographic images to putting a proper treatment plan for the
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malocclusions
existed passing to the placement of the Dental Braces/Orthodontic wires and finishing with the removable and
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fixed
retainers at the
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end
of the treatment.

Furthermore
, your prestigious
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university
has always piqued my interest as it is a top ranked educational establishment with its
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important
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rule
in graduating students who have a strong base and a sufficient amount of academic knowledge to function
properly
in the society and to be successful in their
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own
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lives
as well
as benefiting the
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people
and
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the society around them
.

And speaking as a Dentist, I feel that completing my ulterior studies with you is a
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big
step for me in terms of academic life and my career as the clinical practice in this course will
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help
me gain the required experience to be a successful Orthodontist and a quality Dentist, and I am sure that
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I am the right choice to
be considered
for this program.

In addition
to all of that, I have read a lot about Belgium and the life there, It caught my attention for its diversity of cultures from which I can learn a lot from the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
there and from their lifestyles. Not forgetting the Dutch language which I find
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very
engaging, enjoyable, and easy to learn and acquire.

Studying Orthodontics is Ghent
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University
is an opportunity I would
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love
to dedicate myself too
wholeheartedly
, and I hope I will be able to contribute to the community the best way I
possibly
can. I
am convinced
that I am a valuable addition to the program. I hope to be
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given
a chance, as I am confident that I am capable of meeting and even exceeding your expectations.

Thank you for considering my application

Yours
sincerely


Ahmed Al
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Aji
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IELTS letter Write a motivation letter to the director of the program which you are applying for.

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