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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. KeJM
Dear sir, I am Angel, the regular customer at your restaurant Forest flower. I writing this letter to express my dissatisfication towards the customer service and food taste. Firstly, I was really shocked to see the aburpt in the employees attitude towards the regular customers. However, if you are not taking this as a adverse suggestion then this will bring out a impact in organisation revenue. For instance, the waiter failed to attend even after waiting for an hour. I am able to understand the heatic workload during the peak session. Eventhough, it is better to appoint a plethora of workers with passion towards the field. Secondly, I visited the hotel with my family to spent some quality time together. The heatic noise in and around the hotel is really annoying. Thus we had to leave the restaurant with a empty stomach. This created a negative impression about your image and waiters. I hope you will consider my feedback for future reference. Yours faithfullyAngel
Dear sir, I am Angel, the regular customer at your restaurant Forest flower.
Did you mean "I'm writing", "I am writing", or "I was writing"?
I writing
this letter to express my
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dissatisfication
towards the customer service and food taste.
Firstly
, I was
really
shocked to
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see
the
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aburpt
in the
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "employees'" or "employee's"?
employees
attitude towards the regular customers.
However
, if you are not taking this as
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
adverse suggestion then this will bring out
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
impact in
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organisation
revenue.
For instance
, the waiter failed to attend even after waiting for an hour. I am able to understand the
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heatic
workload during the peak session.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Eventhough
, it is better to appoint a plethora of workers with passion towards the field.
Secondly
, I visited the hotel with my family
Did you mean "to spend"?
to spent
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some
quality time together. The
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heatic
noise in and around the hotel is
really
annoying.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Thus
we had to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
the restaurant with
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
empty stomach. This created a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
impression about your image and waiters. I hope you will consider my feedback for future reference. Yours
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
faithfullyAngel
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IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
163 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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