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Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They just sent you some holiday photos write a letter to your friends.

Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They just sent you some holiday photos write a letter to your friends. QOV1
Dear Alisha and Neha, How are you both? I hope this letter finds you well. I cannot express how much i enjoyed with you. I would like to thank you for the remarkable holiday in your city and for the lovely photos that you sent me yesterday. I would like to thank you for organizing such a wonderful trip and allowing me to stay at your home and sending me the beautiful photographs. All the photos are amazing. I am sorry I could not write to you earlier after coming from holidays because my mother become sick. I got really busy to take care of my mother. Now, She seems to be improving. Now, it is my turn to invite you to my city and spend some time with us. We will be celebrating our wedding anniversary next month. You must stay with us. I really hope you can came to my home. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours lovingly, Harpreet.
Dear Alisha and
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Neha
, How are you both? I hope this letter finds you well. I cannot express how much
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
enjoyed with you.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would like to thank you for the remarkable holiday in your city and for the lovely photos that you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
me yesterday.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would like to thank you for organizing such a wonderful trip and allowing me to stay at your home and sending me the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
photographs. All the photos are amazing. I am sorry I could not write to you earlier after coming from holidays
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
my mother become sick. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
really
busy to take care of my mother.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
, She seems to be improving.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
, it is my turn to invite you to my city and spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time with us. We will be celebrating our wedding anniversary
next
month. You
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
stay with us. I
really
hope you can
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "come"
came
to my home. I hope to hear from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
. Yours
lovingly
,
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Harpreet
.
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IELTS letter Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They just sent you some holiday photos write a letter to your friends.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
163 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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