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When you reached home, you realised you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: say when and where you lost your hand luggage describe the bag and its contents suggest the action you would like the airline to take Write at least 150 words

When you reached home, you realised you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: say when and where you lost your hand luggage describe the bag and its contents suggest the action you would like the airline to take eBRW

Dear Sir or Madam, I am reaching out tou you for recovering my missing bag. Yesterday I flew the London plane from Istanbul on the flight 3345 at 4: 00 pm and my seat number was 12A. After the landing during the taxi maneouver of the aircraft, I was filling the required paperwork and completely forgot about my hand luggage when exi located in the overhead compartment when exiting The bag is in green colour and it has an Adidas logo on the top and the front facing side. It has got two wheels and a handle that is extendable for carrying. Inside the luggage, I have clothes, underwear, a pair of shoes, a phone charger and an electronic tablet. Would you please be so kind and reply to this mail with the location information where I can collect my luggage? Mail will be a better option for me since my phone battery is dead and I am unable to be reached by phone, I will then come to collect my luggage. I hope you can help me with this matter, Best regards, Jake Roger

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am reaching out Possible spelling mistake found.toyoutoothoutoptour
tou
 you for recovering my missing bag.

Yesterday I flew the London This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
 from Istanbul on the flight 3345 at 4: 00 pm and my seat number was 12A. After the landing during the taxi Possible spelling mistake found.maneuver
maneouver
 of the aircraft, I was filling the required paperwork and completely forgot about my hand luggage when Possible spelling mistake found.exexitexpextEAIEBI
exi
 located in the overhead compartment when exiting

The bag is in green Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
 and it has an Adidas logo on the top and the front facing side. It has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 two wheels and a handle that is
 extendable for carrying. Inside the luggage, I have clothes, underwear, a pair of shoes, a phone charger and an electronic tablet.

Would you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 kind and reply to this mail with the location information where I can collect my luggage? Mail will be a better option for me since my phone battery is Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).dead, and
dead and
 I am unable to be reached
 by phone, I will then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to collect my luggage.

I hope you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me with this matter,

Best regards,

Jake Roger

IELTS letter When you reached home, you realised you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: say when and where you lost your hand luggage describe the bag and its contents suggest the action you would like the airline to take

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

184 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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