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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract. 278k
Dear sir, I am jigisha patel. I have been renting the flat in sky view apartment, London. I am writing this letter to let you know that i have to vacant your flat two months earlier. We have signed contract for twelve month but i have to vacant your flat two months early. We have discussed about my profession I am working in international company and i have achieved promotion as a manager in our company's othe branch in new York. I have to joined there as early as possible. We signed agreement for twelve months but i have to leave from here in October. I am unable to continue our agreement so i would request you to release me from this contract. I know it is not allowed but i request you to do possible you can i appreciate if you can return my deposit. I would be grateful if you consider my request and do needful. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, Jigisha patel
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patel
. I have been renting the flat in sky view apartment, London. I am writing this letter to
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have to
vacant your flat two
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earlier. We have signed contract for twelve
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i
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have to
vacant your flat two
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early. We have
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discussed about my
profession I am working in international
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company
and
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have achieved promotion as a manager in our
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new York
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joined
there as early as possible. We signed agreement for twelve
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months
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but
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i
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have to
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leave
from here in October. I am unable to continue our agreement
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i
would request you to release me from this contract. I know it is not
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allowed
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but
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request you to do possible you can
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appreciate if you can return my deposit.
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I
would be grateful if you consider my request and do needful. Thanking you, Yours
faithfully
,
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patel

IELTS letter You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

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  American English
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5.0
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