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lost hand luggage on the plane

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Dear Sir or Madam, I was a passenger on the flight TK2727 from Istanbul to Gaziantep on January 21st and my seat was 21F. Unfortunately when I reached home and checked my belongings I was unable to find my hand luggage. I believe I left it over my head storage compartment. It has an "Gucci" logo embossed on its front and three white stripes on the back. Inside it, I have my identification card, a picture of my daughter, credit and debit cards, some cash and a memory card. I also attached a sample picture of the same hand luggage I found on the internet. Please reach out to me by phone or reply to this mail so that I know it is in safe hands. After your confirmation of finding it I can pick it up from one of your offices located in Kadikoy if it is possible, since your main office the airport is very far from the city center. I am looking forward for your reply, Regards
Dear Sir or Madam,

I was a passenger on the flight TK2727 from Istanbul to Gaziantep on January 21st and my seat was 21F.

Unfortunately when I reached home and
checked
my belongings I was unable to find my hand luggage. I believe I
left
it over my head storage compartment.

It has
an
"
Gucci
"
logo embossed on its front and three white stripes on the back. Inside it, I have my identification card, a picture of my daughter, credit and debit cards,
some
cash and a memory card. I
also
attached a sample picture of the same hand luggage I found on the internet.

Please
reach out to me by phone or reply to this mail
so
that I know it is in safe hands. After your confirmation of finding it I can pick it up from one of your offices located in
Kadikoy
if it is possible, since your main office the airport is
very
far from the city center.

I am looking forward for your reply,

Regards
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