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Write a letter your principle who has canceled the business studying courses recently. Now you are facing problem also ask the reason the postponed of the course.

Write a letter your principle who has canceled the business studying courses recently. Now you are facing problem also ask the reason the postponed of the course. rboGN
Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to your connection to say that I am a full-time student at your school on the Business English course. Unfortunately, I have heard the subject has been canceled, but it has already taken three months from my life. This is due to the fact that I want to know the details of the plausible reason behind it. As you know, I got a chance to take the same course at different institutes with less cost. However, I did not enroll there because your organization assured me that this place was well-adjusted for me. On the other hand, I had some plans after completing the course to start a new business. Moreover, my father has established a business center where decoration is now ongoing. At the end of three months, given that the program will be ended, the business will be started. On the contrary, My single parent has already invested a lot of money in the depend of the course. In addition, every organization has already closed its admission doors for the moment. Furthermore, I would request to continue the class due to the fact that my father is an overprotective parent who doesn't want to lose the opportunity. I would be grateful if you rethink my resume for the language course that will benefit me as well as my society. I am eagerly waiting to hear your feedback. Yours Sincerely, H. M. Shah Paran Ali
Dear Sir,

I am writing a letter to your connection to say that I am a full-time student at your school on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Business
English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. Unfortunately, I have heard the subject has
been canceled
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it has already taken three months from my life.
This is due to the fact that
I want to know the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of the plausible reason behind it.

As you know, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
a chance to take the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
at
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
institutes with less cost.
However
, I did not enroll there
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
your organization assured me that this place was well-adjusted for me.
On the other hand
, I had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
plans after completing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
business
.
Moreover
, my father has established a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
business
center where decoration is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
ongoing. At the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of three months,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
that the program will
be ended
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
business
will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
.

On the contrary
, My single parent has already invested
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
money in the
The verb 'to depend' requires the preposition '(up)on': "depend on".
depend
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
.
In addition
, every organization has already closed its admission doors for the moment.
Furthermore
, I would request to continue the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
due to the fact that my father is an overprotective parent who doesn't want to lose the opportunity. I would be grateful if you rethink my resume for the language
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
that will benefit me
as well
as my society.

I am
eagerly
waiting to hear your feedback.

Yours
Sincerely
,

H. M. Shah
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Paran
Ali
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IELTS letter Write a letter your principle who has canceled the business studying courses recently. Now you are facing problem also ask the reason the postponed of the course.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
242 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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