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Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. OQ5M
Dear Mrs. Leslie Smith, I am writing this letter to inform you about my decision of discontuning the course of Time Managment in Business. It was a hard decision for me as I really do enjoy the course, find it informative and have practiced some of the methods you taught in my day to day life. I would also like to inform you that my reason to do is due to the nature of my job and family sistuation it is getting harder for me to keep track of the course and finish all tasks. To explain my sistuation further I would like you to know that I work as a Paralegal full time and also have a young baby at home. Managing work which sometimes involves bringing paperwork home along with long hours and the baby, is extremely challenging at the moment, considering the demands and needs of my job. I really hope that in the future I can find more time to take on more course I. According to my plan I should be able to return in the summer term for 2022, I wonder if I will be able to transfer or hold my current credits? If you have any information on this, I would really appreciate your suggestions. Lastly, I would like to say thank you for all your help and tips. I am sure I will make use of them. Yours Truly, Maya Triller
Dear Mrs. Leslie Smith,

I am writing this letter to inform you about my decision of
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discontuning
the
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course
of Time
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Managment
in Business. It was a
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hard
decision for me as I
really
do enjoy the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
, find it informative and have practiced
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some of the
methods you taught in my
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day to day
life.

I would
also
like to inform you that my reason to do is due to the nature of my job and family
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sistuation
it is getting harder for me to
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keep
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
and finish all tasks. To
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explain
my
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sistuation
further
I would like you to know that I work as a Paralegal full time and
also
have a young baby at home. Managing work which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
involves bringing paperwork home along with long hours and the baby, is
extremely
challenging at the moment, considering the demands and needs of my job.

I
really
hope that in the future I can find more time to take on more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
I. According to my plan I should be able to
The usual collocation for "return" is "to" not "in" with. Did you mean "return to"?
return in
the summer term for 2022, I wonder if I will be able to transfer or hold my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
credits? If you have any information on this, I would
really
appreciate your suggestions.
Lastly
, I would like to say thank you for all your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
and tips. I am sure I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of them.

Yours
Truly
,

Maya
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Triller
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
238 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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