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Dear Gowtham, Hope you are doing well, I am writing this letter to let you know about the arrangements I have made for you in bangalore and how to reach home from railway station. I am aware that you are arriving bangalore railway station around 6 am in the morning, Unfortunately I will not be at home during that time due to morning shift in my current job. However I have made all necessary arrangements for you here. You can collect the house key from the appartment security and get inside the house and I have also prepared breakfast for you to eat. I have also shared the google map location of the house use the same to book a cab from railway station to reach here. It takes about 20 mins to reach here in cab if you want to take public transport you can come out of the railway station and get in the 12B bus to reach the RR appartments we have bus stop in font of our appartment. I will come back to home by evening 6 pm till then you can take good rest so that we can plan for a movie today evening in the shopping mall nearby. And also, we can plan for dinner there we will get good variety of food to taste. I feel certain you will reach home safe, Cheer up buddy! ! lets rock today evening. Welcome to bangalore. Yours lovingly, RR.
Dear
Gowtham
,

Hope you are doing well, I am writing this letter to
let
you know about the arrangements I have made for you in
bangalore
and how to
reach
home from
railway
station.

I am aware that you are arriving
bangalore
railway
station around 6
am in the morning
, Unfortunately I will not be at home during that time due to morning shift in my
current
job.
However
I have made all necessary arrangements for you here. You can collect the
house
key from the
appartment
security and
get
inside the
house
and I have
also
prepared breakfast for you to eat.

I have
also
shared the
google
map location of the
house
use
the same to book a cab from
railway
station to
reach
here. It takes about 20
mins
to
reach
here in cab if you want to take public transport you can
come
out of the
railway
station and
get
in the 12B bus to
reach
the RR
appartments
we have bus
stop
in font of our
appartment
.

I will
come
back to home by evening 6 pm till then you can take
good
rest
so
that we can plan for a movie
today evening
in the shopping mall nearby. And
also
, we can plan for dinner there we will
get
good
variety of food to taste.

I feel certain you will
reach
home safe, Cheer up buddy! !
lets
rock
today evening
. Welcome to
bangalore
.

Yours
lovingly
,

RR.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your relative

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
243 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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