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Letter to council for the dirty street explain why it has become dirty recently. What problems it has caused. Giving some suggestions

Letter to council for the dirty street explain why it has become dirty recently. What problems it has caused. Giving some suggestions Ymerj
Dear sir, I am writing you to express my dissatisfaction about the poor service provided by your council I would discuss all obstacle of the street in this letter. Let me tell you why this street are becoming dirty day by day firstly, the residents of this area are responsible owing to the fact that they throw garbage of own houses in the street although any doesn't clean the street as a they believe this responsibility only of council apart from that some people use area of street to keep the animals like, dog, cow, befaloo as soon that's what mass in the street has increased more. Moreover, the drizzling systems is not too good due to which in the rain season water is collected lot in the street all residents of this area face problem especially in rain. I want to request you please slove all problem in our street as well as government should keep the fine to those people who have thrown own garage in street. I look forward to waiting from your answer. Your sincerely.
Dear sir,

I am writing you to express my dissatisfaction about the poor service provided by your council I would discuss all obstacle of the
street
in this letter.

Let
me
tell
you why this
street
are becoming dirty day by day
firstly
, the residents of this area are responsible owing to the fact that they throw garbage of
own
houses
in the
street
although any doesn't clean the
street
as
a they
believe this responsibility
only
of council apart from that
some
people
use
area of
street
to
keep
the animals like, dog, cow,
befaloo
as
soon
that's what mass in the
street
has increased more.

Moreover
, the drizzling systems is not too
good
due to which in the rain season water
is collected
lot in the
street
all residents of this area face problem
especially
in rain.

I want to request you
please slove
all problem in our
street
as well
as
government
should
keep
the fine to those
people
who have thrown
own
garage in street.

I look forward to waiting from your answer. Your
sincerely
.
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IELTS letter Letter to council for the dirty street explain why it has become dirty recently. What problems it has caused. Giving some suggestions

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
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