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Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communications, such as letters, emails, or telephone calls. To what extent do you agree?

Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communications, such as letters, emails, or telephone calls. wmROY
In today’s world of advanced technology, the way we communicate with each other has changed so much. People have a variety forms to choose such as letters, emails or telephone call. I partly agree that meeting face to face is better; nevertheless, other types of communication are also essential. On the one hand, meeting face to face helps us communicate easier. Firstly, instead of having video call and using filters, we can have face-to-face meeting so our face expressions and body language can express motions and feelings better. Secondly, communicating by face-to-face improves social skills like talking or connecting with other people. You will become more confident and your vocabulary will be enhanced when you conncet with people. For instance, communicating with foreign tourisms can improve your pronunciation and enrich your knowledge. Also, problems can be tackled more quickly and effectively or making a decision can be more accurately. Moreover, actions like shaking hands or hugging can be done when meeting face-to-face; therefore, the relationship between you and opposite person becomes closer and intimacy. On the other hands, other types of communication are also important in our life. With your smartphone, telephone calls can be made anywhere and anytime without internet connection so it is convenient. If you wanted to hang out with our friends, you would make a phone call to set a plan although you live far from them. When you go to study aboard, in diferent country, you can have a video call for your family through the phone or chair the meeting with partner through online platform. In the pademic of covid-19, it is safer when using other forms of commucation such as video calling, chatting online and studying if you are students. Therefore, we can prevent from the breakthrough of disease. To sum up, both face-to-face and other types of communication have profitable and useful for our life, so we should balance between them to maintain your relationship with other people.
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People
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. I partly
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is better;
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,
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other
types of communication are
also
essential.

On the one hand,
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face
to
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helps
us communicate easier.
Firstly
,
instead
of having video
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call
and using filters, we can have face-to-face
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meeting
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so
our
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expressions and body language can express motions and feelings better.
Secondly
, communicating by face-to-face
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improves
social
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skills
like talking or connecting with
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other
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people
. You will become more confident and your vocabulary will
be enhanced
when you
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conncet
with
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people
.
For instance
, communicating with foreign
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tourisms can
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improve
your pronunciation and enrich your knowledge.
Also
, problems can
be tackled
more
quickly
and
effectively
or making a decision can be more
accurately
.
Moreover
, actions like shaking hands or hugging can
be done
when
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meeting
face-to-face;
therefore
, the relationship between you and opposite person becomes closer and intimacy.

On the
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other
hands,
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other
types of communication are
also
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important
in our life. With your smartphone, telephone
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calls
can
be made
anywhere and anytime without internet connection
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so
it is convenient. If you wanted to hang out with our friends, you would
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make
a phone
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call
to set a plan although you
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live
far from them. When you go to study aboard, in
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diferent
country, you can have a video
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call
for your family through the phone or chair the
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meeting
with partner through online platform. In the
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pademic
of
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covid-19
, it is safer when using
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other
forms of
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commucation
such as video calling, chatting online and studying if you are students.
Therefore
, we can
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prevent
from the breakthrough of disease.

To sum up, both face-to-face and
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other
types of communication have profitable and useful for our life,
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so
we should balance between them to maintain your relationship with
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other
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people
.
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IELTS letter Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communications, such as letters, emails, or telephone calls.

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5.5
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