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Being a keen interest holder in the field of computers and information technology, I would like to introduce myself as an eager enjoyer of computer and related subjects hailing from a small village Berkheri falling in the north-eastern province of the state Haryana. I am the only child in the family and live with my father, an …………, mother, a house maker and boutique runner, and my grandmother. Participating in various co-curricular activities, for instance, debates, inter-school quizzes, science exhibitions, and many more, have always catered enthusiasm within me during my schooling days. I can recall that I developed an interest in computers and I was fascinated by various sorts of software that I could use with it when I was in grade 8 and since then I have always dreamt of becoming a software developer. I strongly believe that the possession of time management skills and the amusement that I feel while solving complex mathematical problems will surely benefit me in long term to adopt coding as my forte. Before proceeding any further, I shall put forward more about myself. I did complete my matriculation in the year 2019 by achieving 92. 6% and Senior Secondary in the year 2021 by securing 83. 4% in Non-Medical Stream both from the CBSE board, one of the most esteemed boards in the country, from Akal Academy Ajitser Ratia and G N Khalsa Senior Secondary School respectively, both being well-reputed schools. To get a head start at my higher studies in the field of computer programming, I have already completed certification courses in C programming and PYTHON from GUVI, India’s first vernacular EdTech Platform incubated by IIT-M and IIM-A. To acquire much needed practical knowledge and experience a global exposure necessary for top-tier skill development to make myself able of meeting the present industry’s needs and adequate of fulfilling my dreams, I have thought to pursue the Diploma in Computer Programming at Seneca College Reason for choosing Seneca College: Despite receiving offers from other colleges in Canada, I have chosen Seneca College as my intense online research made me conclude that it is Seneca College that caters to all my interests, and its connections with top-tier open-source companies such as Mozilla and Red Hat will unarguably help me to receive a top-notch education in the field. Also, the curriculum of this college is the best, according to me. The objective of choosing Canada as a study destination: After a profound amount of online and offline research coupled with discussion with some friends that are studying abroad, I am convinced to pursue my higher education abroad due to the availability of more practical education along with industrial exposure, both of which are the most crucial aspects of studying computer programming. Moreover, Indian institutes lack quality education. As a result of intensive studies regarding educational institutes worldwide, I have concluded that Canadian colleges are one of the best education providers and also their education is being valued by employers all around the globe, especially in India. Not only this but, the supportive policies of the Canadian government towards international students, the health care system, personal security, multicultural communities along the amiable environment made me get gravitated towards studying at a Canadian College. Such quality experience will help me, in my home country, in bringing numerous amount of improvements to the Indian IT Industry. Future Goals Upon the successful completion of my diploma at Seneca College, I intend to return to my home country foreseeing the rapid growth of the Indian IT industry, which is one the fastest growing in the world. Prospects, here, are much bright. The Government of India’s flagship initiatives like “Digital India”, “Make in India” etc. are contributing towards making the country one of the fastest-growing economies. The surprising number of new set-ups of world-renowned IT companies and new IT-related startups in India have sky-rocketed the employment opportunities for highly skilled professionals and candidates with education from advanced countries, keeping in mind in-depth knowledge and global exposure they possess, have an edge over others. I took the IELTS Academic Test, dated 09 October 2021, at Ambala Centre (Centre Number – IN855). My candidate number was 309454. I scored an overall band score of 8. 0 with 9. 0 bands in Listening, 9. 0 bands in Reading, 6. 5 bands in Writing, and 7. 0 bands in Speaking. Moreover, I have already paid my first-year tuition fees accounting for CAD 16113. 79 and CAD 10, 200 for the GIC account. I did intensive hard work while applying to the right Canadian Institution for the course that I am keenly interested in. I am extremely excited as well as interested in going to Seneca College. I am already halfway towards fulfilling my dream of studying in Canada and now I am looking forward to pursue with further procedures for the completion of my application. Having a student visa for Canada is the prerequisite to commence with my course. I request you to consider my application for visa approval as per your satisfaction so that I can fulfill my dreams and achieve all my aspirations.
Being a keen interest holder in the field of computers and information technology, I would like to introduce myself as an eager
enjoyer
of computer and related subjects hailing from a
small
village
Berkheri
falling in the north-eastern province of the state Haryana. I am the
only
child in the family and
live
with my father, an …………, mother, a
house
maker and boutique runner, and my grandmother. Participating in various co-curricular activities,
for instance
, debates, inter-school quizzes, science exhibitions, and
many
more, have always catered enthusiasm within me during my schooling days.

I can recall that I developed an interest in
computers and
I
was fascinated
by various sorts of software that I could
use
with it when I was in grade 8 and since then I have always dreamt of becoming a software developer. I
strongly
believe that the possession of time management
skills
and the amusement that I feel while solving complex mathematical problems will
surely
benefit me in long term to adopt coding as my forte.
Before
proceeding any
further
, I shall put forward more about myself.

I did complete my matriculation in the year 2019 by achieving 92. 6% and Senior Secondary in the year 2021 by securing 83. 4% in Non-Medical Stream both from the CBSE board, one of the most esteemed boards in the
country
, from
Akal
Academy
Ajitser
Ratia
and G N
Khalsa
Senior Secondary School
respectively
, both being well-reputed schools.

To
get
a head
start
at my higher studies in the field of computer
programming
, I have already completed certification courses in C
programming
and PYTHON from
GUVI
, India’s
first
vernacular
EdTech
Platform incubated by IIT-M and IIM-A.

To acquire
much needed
practical knowledge and experience a global exposure necessary for top-tier
skill
development to
make
myself able of meeting the present industry’s needs and adequate of fulfilling my dreams, I have
thought
to pursue the Diploma in Computer
Programming
at Seneca College

Reason for choosing Seneca College:

Despite receiving offers from other colleges in Canada, I have chosen Seneca College as my intense online research made me conclude that it is Seneca College that caters to all my interests, and its connections with top-tier open-source
companies
such as Mozilla and Red Hat will
unarguably
help
me to receive a top-notch
education
in the field.
Also
, the curriculum of this college is the best, according to me.

The objective of choosing Canada as a study destination:

After a profound amount of online and offline research coupled with discussion with
some
friends that are
studying
abroad, I
am convinced
to pursue my higher
education
abroad due to the availability of more practical
education
along with industrial exposure, both of which are the most crucial aspects of
studying
computer
programming
.
Moreover
, Indian institutes lack quality
education
.
As a result
of intensive studies regarding educational institutes worldwide, I have concluded that Canadian colleges are one of the best
education
providers and
also
their
education
is
being valued
by employers all around the globe,
especially
in India.

Not
only
this
but
, the supportive policies of the Canadian
government
towards international students, the health care system, personal security, multicultural communities along the amiable environment made me
get
gravitated towards
studying
at a Canadian College. Such quality experience will
help
me, in my home
country
, in bringing numerous amount of improvements to the Indian IT Industry.

Future Goals

Upon the successful completion of my diploma at Seneca College, I intend to return to my home
country
foreseeing the rapid growth of the Indian IT industry, which is
one
the fastest growing in the world. Prospects, here, are much bright. The
Government
of India’s flagship initiatives like “Digital India”, “
Make
in India” etc. are contributing towards making the
country
one of the fastest-growing economies. The surprising number of new set-ups of world-renowned IT
companies
and new IT-related startups in India have sky-rocketed the employment opportunities for
highly
skilled professionals and candidates with
education
from advanced
countries
, keeping in mind in-depth knowledge and global exposure they possess, have an edge over others.

I took the IELTS Academic
Test
, dated
09 October 2021
, at
Ambala
Centre
(
Centre
Number
IN855). My candidate number was 309454. I scored an
overall
band
score of 8. 0 with 9. 0
bands
in Listening, 9. 0
bands
in Reading, 6. 5
bands
in Writing, and 7. 0
bands
in Speaking.

Moreover
, I have already paid my
first
-year tuition fees accounting for CAD 16113. 79 and CAD 10, 200 for the
GIC
account.

I did intensive
hard
work while applying to the right Canadian Institution for the course that I am
keenly
interested in. I am
extremely
excited
as well
as interested in going to Seneca College.
I
am already halfway towards fulfilling my dream of
studying
in Canada and
now
I am looking forward
to pursue
with
further
procedures for the completion of my application. Having a student visa for Canada is the prerequisite to commence with my course. I request you to consider my application for visa approval as per your satisfaction
so
that I can fulfill my dreams and achieve all my aspirations.
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IELTS letter offer letter statement of purpose.

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14 paragraphs
851 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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